January 23, 2011

Fibonacci Poetry365 .23 Success! Revised

Success!

1.    Someone
1      e-mailed
2      to say
3      finding this blog
5      ruined her plans to wash
8      the floors. Victory! My mission here is complete.

8 comments:

Jenn said...

I've realized why Fred loved proof reading all of your work. Yes he liked helping you but when he found an error, he won.

-2 equals 8

Jenn said...

+1 equals 8

I win.

Mary said...

You are so annoying. And yet so dear. Thank you. Any suggestions?

Mary said...

You read the first version, which was too long in the 8 line. I revised it and counted. It was really, really late. And you are so right about Fred. Pure joy when he found a comma out of place.

Jenn said...

Suggestions? To make it 8 instead of 7?
Easy. Throw in a very.

Mary said...

You MUST be joking. That's the easy way out. Ask Devin for a decent suggestion that actually works. I can't just THROW IN A VERY. Lord,have we ever even met??

Jenn said...

I enjoy completing a job and moving on to the next one.
You delight in the journey of arriving at the end.

Hmmm, one of us is published and the other is not. This would be one of the reasons why!

Mary said...

Your statement reads like poetry. Another reason you aren't published is that you've never submitted anything for publication. They never knock at your door and say, "Please write something for me."